Thursday, 3 March 2016

Work on Writing

The mystery of the…..
Once there lived a 3 year old girl called Isabella she lived in a rusty old broken house.  She didn't like any rooms in or out.  Isabella  was desperate to move house she asked every single day for 1 year.  Then finally after 5 years of asking she finally moved house she was so excited too. “yay” she exclaimed.  It was going to be a two story brick house.  It was the day before they were leaving they were packing and shopping for some new food for the new house there were people coming to pick up the furniture it was crazy.  Isabella asked how long it would take to go there, Her mum said “ 2 hours”.  They got in the car and drove to their new house. “Wow” Isabella said.  They finally got there and she thought it looked ugly on the picture but it was actually amazing.  She looked and looked and kept looking and she couldn't find her room the final look was lucky and she found her room. There was a bed and a shelf and a window and a bathroom and a closet.  She opened her closet and found a lump in the middle on the floor she lifted it up and it was a trap door she looked down but she couldn't see anything in there.  She felt something she SCREAMED, AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH.  Then she realized it was only a ladder so she crawled down it and it was PITCH BLACK.

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