Tuesday, 31 October 2017

Kindness Poem


WALT: use new words to suit my acrostic poem

I was able to use new words in my acrostic poem that I have not used in my writing before, eg. Kindhearted and Everlasting. I was also able to use examples of kind words/kind actions in my sentences.

Next time I will try and use more new words in my poem and use a theasaurues to replace words that I have used before and change them into words I haven't used.

Thursday, 26 October 2017

Recount - Writing


Write a rad recount:

I was able to use paragraphs and year 6 words.

Next time I need to use time connective words without being asked.

Tuesday, 17 October 2017

John Pule Art



This was for our art exhibition. This was my reflection and art work.