Camp Merc Acrostic Poem
Absailing down a wall which was as blue as the sky.
Mrs.Houghton making delicious meals.
Parents encouraging us to go higher and higher.
Marine education recreation center.
Every one using teamwork to canoe away from the sandy beach.
Running fastly across the wet beach.
Canoes floating around in the blue sea.
2 freezing nights.
0 % of UN-fun.
1 run on the wet beach.
7 activities I completed.
Julia-2017 Room 19
WALT: Edit and revise my Camp Merc writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback.
Learning Reflection:
I did not make changes to my poem.
Next time I am going to ask someone who is really good at feedback and ask for feedback
